Tuesday, May 27, 2025

Act 3 finalish beats

Act 2 final beats

1. Hunter's dream. 

2. Sunrise, kitchen, coffee, Tom reveal.

3. Hunter tells Chloe.

4. Wanda with Daisy gets call from Hunter.

5. Ruth gets Wanda's call.

6. Gil with Maria gets Ruth's call.

7. Hunter and Chloe watch paramedic truck drive away.

8. Barbara with Brian, John and Jan on golf course gets Hunter's call.

9. Doc gets Hunter's call.

10. Hunter and Chloe.

11. Daisy and Wanda, Laramie airport.

12. Gil arrive Ruth's.

13. Hunter and Doc.

14. Sess with Claire get Jackie's call. Hunter enters Jackie's house, sobs. 

15. Daisy at home with photo albums. 


[CUT TO

A4

Next day. Hunter leaves in truck.] 

Act 2 finalish beats

Act 1 final beats

1. Day. About the truck, heeere's Jackie, away they go.

2. Doc gets Hunter selfie. 

3. John and Jan. "I found them" re Tom's middle name. A Chloe selfie Barbara has forwaded. 

4. Barbara at home placing same selfie, framed.

5. Int. Rover. Hunter, Jackie, Chloe, Tom re "last time on a horse." White Sands re sunset on the way home. Chloe takes a selfie with Tom.

6. Wanda and Ruth facetime.

7. Sess and Claire, Rover arrive, intros and saddle up.

8. The pines, woodpecker, horses and riders.

9. Gil, Maria, The Boys. Re Tom's Las Cruces layover.

10. Mountain meadow.

11. Horses/riders uphill 'round the bend, Sierra Blanca.

12. Pinus Ponderosa, Tom's buckle re grandfather and the family tree Ruth keeps on ancestry website. Triangle bell. Jackie, Claire and Sess re Tom's relationship to Hunter.

13. John and Jan re last time on a horse. Re Grand Canyon mule ride and respective stories from a long time ago.

14. Creekside. Tom and Hunter re fishing. Hunter re John and Jan's boat at Lake Nacimiento.

15. Brian and his father re "golf tomorrow" and Foglost.

16. Horse barn, hay and Honda Knot. Ice cream in Rui White Sands sunset, coffee before they go.

17. Wanda and Daisy. Tom's Rui selfie with Chloe.

18. White Sands sunset. "One more" selfie.

19. Night. Hunter's, Jackie leaves. Shooting star. In they go. Coyote.

20. The Tahoe tale, Tom to bed, Chloe to call mom.  


[CUT TO:

A3, 

1. Hunter's dream.}

Act 1 finalish beats

Have said 'final" plenty onlty soon realize (time after time), "not so fast." But through such process does the Rubik's Cuibe at last CLICK.

This re Act 1 feels like the one that sets in cement.

1. CREDITS, Tom, Wanda, Snowy Range sunset, Hawaii.

2. Sunrise. Tom leaves.

3. Gil, Maria, The Boys, Foglost, Hunter's blurb. Tom, Wanda re arrive Ruth's. Tom's Huey selfie.

4. Sunset. Wanda and Daisy, Tom's ringtone, ABQ motel room. Tom call Ruth, VM. Foglost.

5. Sunrise. Tom leave Yucca Springs motel.

6. John driving Benz w/Jan, Barbara, Chloe. Re horse day.

7. Hunter home office, Chloe pic and screensaver

8. Tom driving Hunter's hood, makes the GPS turn.

9. Hunter, kitchen, patio, yard, calendar Chloe, catfood, receycle bag.

10. Ext. Hunter's house, Rover and motorcycle in open garage. Tom nearing, stops, idles, Hunter, Tom drives away.

11. Hunter foyer, doorbell. Hunter front porch, Tom and Howdy, enter.

12. John, Jan and Barbara gets Hunter's call re Tom Walker. John re getting a middle name.

13. Wanda with Daisy gets Tom's call from Hunter's guest room. Tom calls Ruth picking peaches in Fredericksburg. Tom leaves, appears yard, selfie.

14. Gil with Foglost gets Tom's selfie. Hijole.

15. Hunter and Chloe airport parking lot.

16. Hunter and Chloe near Hunter's house, Tom's truck in driveway, garage door open, in they go.

17. Hunter's kitchen, Tom at patio, intros.

18. Barbara tells Brian about Tom and Olivia.

19. Sunset. John and Jan powerwalk re TV cowboys, boots and spurs.

20. Patio night. Hunter, Chloe and Tom around table. Re ranch foreman, meeting Wanda and Hawaii. Chloe re Tom come along on horse day. 

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[ACT 2

Next day. About the truck and heeere's Jackie.]  

Patio Night

EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Tom and Chloe sit at the table, remnants of dinner on plates, glass pitcher of water. Tom hatless.  Monsoon clouds obscure the full moon. WIND slightly jostles umbrella.

HUNTER: So Tom, what do or did you do for a living?

TOM: Did. Ranch foreman for thirty-five years, ranch hand before that. Retired ten years.

CHLOE: What kind of ranch or ranches?

TOM: Ranches. Worked several. Cattle ranches.

CHLOE: For beef and milk.

TOM: Yes ma'am, although tended to be one or the other dependin' on the ranch. I reckon you as a vegetarian might have a thought or two about the enterprise.

Chloe nods.

CHLOE: Maybe we can talk more about that another time.

TOM: Be more'n happy to. My thoughts on it have shifted some over the years. Wanda and I have some friends with a steakhouse in Cheyenne, and we'll do that a couple times a year, but we been cuttin' back the past several years and these days it's fish a few times a week and Ruth's fried chicken we're there or she's visitin'.   

CHLOE: Where did you meet Wanda?

TOM: Post office in Boise, Idaho, where she worked and I had a mailbox.

CHLOE: Love at first sight?

TOM: Close to it. Married a year to the day later.

HUNTER: Plans for your twenty-fifth?

TOM: Goin' to Hawaii.

CHLOE: Cool. What island or islands?

TOM: Oahu. First few nights in Waikiki, the last few in a place called Kailua. 

CHLOE: Have you been before?

TOM: No ma'am, first time for both of us.

CHLOE: Excited?

TOM: We are. Not so much about the flyin' part but that's what comes with it. Y'all prob'ly been.

Chloe and Hunter nod. 

FAINT THUNDER.

HUNTER: Here it comes. You probably got rain in Albuquerque last night.

TOM: Plenty. Put me straight to sleep.

HUNTER: It helps me too.

TOM: Speakin' a sleep, and sorry to be a party pooper, but I hope y'all'll excuse me to call my wife and sister and get on to bed. Chloe, that casserole was delicious.

CHLOE: Thanks. Glad you liked it.

TOM: Hope the recipe ain't secret 'cause I know Wanda would love it too.

CHLOE: No secret. Before you leave in the morning.

TOM: Thank you.

He stands. STRONGER BREEZE.

TOM (CONT.) Thank ya both. 

HUNTER: Thanks for the conversation. 

TOM: Well, my tremendous pleasure.

HUNTER: We'll have to do it again sometime.

TOM: I'd sure like that.

HUNTER: Then it's a date.

TOM: Alrighty then.

HUNTER/CHLOE: Goodnight, Tom.

TOM: Goodnight, y'all.

They watch Tom walk to, enter dining room, pass to kitchen, leave view into hall.  The first RAINDROPS tap the umbrella and patio. LOUDER THUNDER.

CHLOE: It sounds like he might not be in such a hurry to get to Ruth's.

HUNTER: I wonder if you're reading my mind.

CHlOE: Maybe, if he wanted to, and Jackie could wrangle another horse, he could come along tomorrow.

Hunter smiles and winks at her, gets phone from pocket, speaks into it. HARDER RAIN.

HUNTER: Jackie.

Hey.

She's right here with me on the patio. 

Yep, first drops right now. 

Still on. That is why I'm calling. We have a surprise visitor here and are wondering, if said visitor would want to come along, if your cousin could wrangle another horse.

Great. 

A man named Tom Walker.

I'll call you back in a bit.

(He pockets phone, stands, nods, Chloe stands. They walk into house and out of view into hallway per Tom's path.)

LOUDER THUNDER, HARDER RAIN, STRONGER WIND.