Friday, April 25, 2025

scene 5

scene 4

INT. MOTEL ROOM - ALBUQUERQUE, NM - SUNSET

Basic second floor room, Tom, shirt unbuttoned, sits at desk, phone at hand, looks out window to monsoon clouds obscuring the Sandia Mountains. Open suitcase on bed, shows a copy of Foglost. Boots on floor near hat rack near door, shirt unbuttoned. LIGHT RAIN taps the window. Tom speaks into phone.

TOM: Ruth.

Hey sis, eagle's landed. I'm gonna run a bath so no phone for about a half hour then in the rest a the night. Call me before bedtime. Love ya.

(He sets down phone, leaves into bathroom. We HEAR BATH STARTED. RAIN HEAVIER. FAINT THUNDER.)