Sunday, June 1, 2025

Barb and Jan at the spa



INT.EXT. MINERAL HOT TUB - DAY

Jan and Barbara soak in the tub on a deck with a view to an oak tree and vineyard. Each with a glass of wine at hand. A door to a room.     

BARBARA: Did dad say where they're driving?

JAN: Santa Rose Creek to Cambria.

BARBARA: Nice.

JAN: Lunch at Oysterville. Do we know if she's found her subject for her video project?

BARBARA: We do. Horse day.

JAN: Really.

BARBARA: Jackie, her cousin and her cousin's girlfriend are contributing a lot of what they shot. 

JAN: When is it due?

BARBARA: First week in October. 

JAN: Can't wait to see it. 

BARBARA: And.

JAN: And.

BARBARA: Hunter says the birthday vehicle issue has been settled.

JAN: Really. 

BARBARA: Yes.

JAN: Cue drumroll.

BARBARA: Hint.

JAN: Okay.

BARBARA: Her surfboard will fit in the bed. 

MASSEUSE, 30, enters, with two towels. 

MASSEUSE: Ready for your massages? 

Barbara and Jan finish the last of their flights, get out of the rub, the attendant hands them their towels and opens door for them to leave through. The attendant props the door open, gets the flight trays, leaves, letting door close behind her.  


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Hunhter, flat fixed.]